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French 101 Fall 1997 Carolyn Fay Ideas
for Grading Compositions in French 101 The following are
some ideas about grading each of the compositions that our students will write
in French 101. You are free to adapt these ideas as you like, or to come up
with your own grading scheme. 1. Give a global
grade (letter grade--A, A-, B+, B etc.) balancing the following criteria:
grammar and spelling; style; interesting content, creativity; improvement from
the rough draft to the final draft.
Here is a rough guide: A= Excellent
grammar, few errors; variation in syntax; well-organized paragraphs, easy to
follow; interesting content, well thought out and creative. B= Grammar
comprehensible, some errors; some variation in syntax; organized paragraphs,
mostly easy to follow--some isolated moments of confusion; generally
interesting content, some repetition. C= Substantial
errors in grammar and spelling; errors in syntax, or too many simple sentences;
few attempts at organization, run-on sentences, no development; hard to
understand; content does not address the topic assigned; carelessly prepared. D= Substantial
errors in grammar, spelling, syntax such that you cannot understand what the
student is trying to say; extremely hard to follow, no organization; content
does not address the topic assigned--no evidence of thought or preparation. F= Student does not
complete the assignment, or attempts to give it to you late, with no prior
arrangement. You should also
take into account good will and effort on the part of the student, the
revisions they make to the rough draft, and their ability to follow directions.
2. Analytical/Split
Grade Scoring: Still using the above criteria, you can also assign each
composition two grades: one for grammar/spelling and one for content and
organization. Thus, a paper with many gramatical errors, but is interesting and
creative, can receive an A for content and a C for grammar. (Which works out to
be a B in the end, but the grades in isolation will help the student know what
to focus on.) 3. Primary Trait
Scoring: Grade is assigned globally, as in #1, but certain features of the
writing are emphasized. I have used this method in the intermediate level
courses. It may be more appropriate when our students’ writing is more
sophisticated, although there are certain aspects which will be useful to
grading French 101 compositions. Basically, as I
read each composition, I fill out a short form with comments that will help me
assign a grade (see attached sample form). This is similar to the analytical
scoring in method #2, however, I will assign one holistic grade to the
composition. The students receive this form with their graded composition. For
the most part, my students in 201 and 232 liked the specific feedback and it
helped them understand their grade and where they need to improve. General notes on
grading compositions.... You will find that students
complain about the composition grade being completely subjective. In a sense,
this cannot be avoided: how you grade something may partially depend upon how
you feel about the student at that moment (either mad at or sorry for them) or
how you are feeling. The best way to keep your grading fair is to keep it
consistent. Decide on the method you will use and stick to it for every paper.
Ask yourself: if this student asks me why I gave him a “B” what will I say?
What is my reason? If you can not decide what grade to give a particular paper,
set it aside and look at it again with a fresh mind. Other tips (that
have worked well for me): Do not try to grade
all of the compositions in one day: split them up evenly across a few days Take about a week
to grade the final drafts. Try to return the final draft of compo 1 to students
before they give you the rough draft of #2.
If your students bug you about getting their papers back, tell them it will
take you a week to grade each one thoroughly. As you read papers
and comment them, do not assign the letter grade immediately. Group papers in
piles: excellent; pretty good; not bad, but needs work, and poor. Then assign
the letter grades all at once, deciding which papers deserve an A, B+, C,
etc. At this point I often take into
account factors that may not be reflected on paper. If a student came to me for
help repeatedly and really worked hard on the paper, I may advance the grade
from a B to a B+; similarly, a B paper that did not follow directions (did not
type the paper, for example) may get a B-. Always make
comments and suggestions about improvement, even if the paper is really bad,
you can probably find one good thing to say about it. Likewise, if the paper is
already excellent, write something that will encourage the writer to push him
or herself even farther. Before you return
the graded compositions to students, briefly explain your grading criteria.
Many students will be shocked and upset to get a C --explain to them exactly
what it means, that it is not the end of the world, and how they can work to
improve. **If you give a D
or F to any composition because it is unintelligible and the grammar is
garbled, show it to Cheryl before you return it to the student, especially
if this is a student who normally does well, or who tries hard. Such work can be the evidence of a learning
problem. General Notes on
the Rough Draft: Give students clear
guidance on how to revise their rough drafts: some examples include: --verify spelling
and accents --check verb
conjugations, article use, adjective agreement --write what you
know how to say! Many student will try to say things for which they do not have
the lexicon or the grammatical knowledge. Steer them away from this. Tell them
to rewrite sentences that do not make sense, using the vocabulary and grammar
from the lessons we have covered in Voilà --follow
directions--complete the assignment as assigned. If a student misunderstood the
task, you will be able to tell in the rough draft. **It is a good idea to do a writing activity in class before or as you return the rough drafts: compile the most common mistakes you found into a sample composition and have students correct it in pairs or groups. This is a good way to teach them about revising their writing. |