Nom: ____________________________________                  Date:____________________

 

Composition 4: Commentaires

 

 

Part A: Structure and Clarity

 

1. Option A only:  Identify the thesis or topic sentence. What is your main point or argument?

 

2. Option A only: Do you follow the structural model on the assignment sheet? (intro; explication; conclusion) * Do not simply retell the story*

 

3. Option B only: How have you decided to rewrite or change the story (plot, characters, point of view, end, etc.)?

 

4. Option B only: Have you tried to imitate the author’s style? If so, how? If not, justify your reasons for changing it. 

 

5. Check to see that transitions from paragraph to paragraph are clear.

6. Does your title prepare the reader? Is it informative, interesting and to the point?

 

7. What do you perceive to be the strengths of this composition?

 

 

 

Part B: Proofreading

 

**Spelling: accents, elisions, gender, number:                           

(extra points will be taken off for this type of mistake)

 

 

Adjective placement and noun/adj. agreement:                             

 

Verb tenses and moods: (Option B: pay attention)                       

 

Verb conjugations:                                                                                             

 

Choice of article: definite, indefinite, partitive:                               

 

Synonyms and variation of vocabulary:                                         

 

Variation in sentence structure and complexity:                            

 

Correct choice of vocabulary:                                                                           

Check in a good dictionary!              

 

Part C: Other Requirements

 

Final draft typed, double-spaced                                                      ____________

Include rough draft and checklist                                                     ____________

200-250 words                                                                                       ____________

 

                                                                                                                                                                Note: __________


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